Saturday, March 20, 2010

A Very Personal Poem

If there is a poem that can sum up my current state of emotions, here it is.

World / World

World you thought was cold
World turned out to be great
World you thought to be blind
World turned out to be vivid
World you thought to not feel
World turned out to be loving
World you thought to be ice-blue
World turned out to be red
World you thought heard not
World turned out loves you.

This is a really personal reflection on how I am now. If you know me in person, don't bother to ask me about this poem and why I came up with this. Thank you.

5 Responses to “A Very Personal Poem”

Raft3r said...
March 24, 2010 at 8:52 PM

sabi nga ni natalie merchant:
life is sweet in spite of the misery

hmmm...
akala ko tungko din sa luga ito
hehe

btw, di na pus yun english transalation ko sa luga, ah
hehe


Jerick said...
March 24, 2010 at 9:02 PM

yeah, when i'm in my senses then i would only realize that life is great.

nagmana ata ako sayo kuya. may pagka-baliw. hehehe.


Raft3r said...
March 28, 2010 at 9:33 AM

nyahaha
runs in the blood ba
hehe

pero meron kang talent na wala ako
paggawa ng tula
turuan moko!

happy weekend


Jerick said...
March 29, 2010 at 8:34 PM

how i constructed my thoughts during that time was pretty much how i got to make this poem.

for me, it is emotions written


dakilangduca said...
March 30, 2010 at 9:42 PM

emote


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